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WELCOME TO sentinel nigeria | Issue #1 | February 2010

 

Fiction

 

The Civilized Woman

a short story by

Chinelo Onwualu

 

It was Shoshane, the week of peace, when Trajan returned to his mother. He found her on the high bluff overlooking the Great Sea gathering healing herbs. As he climbed the sandy path that began at the village below and continued up to the cliff's edge to meet her, he admired the view of her homestead.

 

There was a feeling of great space on the hillside with its view of a wide blue sky that stretched from one end of the horizon to the other, but a few steps on either side revealed a sheer, terrifying drop.  Located on a spit of land jutting out of the main continent like a defiant fist, it was a gentle grass-covered islet where his mother and her people grazed sheep and tended fruit trees. It had been handed down from mother to daughter for generations and would go to the first daughter of his wife—should he have one—according to ancient custom.

 

But Trajan was not sure how long such custom could continue. A new faith was blowing through the Land like a wind-borne plague, carrying many, Trajan's father among them. Years ago, his mother left his father to return to her people. She was a priestess of the Goddess and could no longer abide with him. Trajan had gone with her, for he was only a child at the time. As he soon as he reached manhood, though, his mother had sent him back to live with his father. Every year, Trajan returned to celebrate Shoshane with his mother, for it was no longer practiced at his father's court.

 

Trajan's mother was perched precariously at the rim of the cliff. With one hand, she held on to a branch of a sturdy tree that grew by the roadside while with the other, she reached down over the lip of the cliff toward a spray of plants growing on a rock just below her. Beyond her, the bluff fell away into a dizzying blue ocean where the sea roiled angrily around odd rock formations. He slid onto his stomach over the edge, plucked a handful of leaves from the plant that was just beyond his mother's reach and handed them to her.

 

“My thanks, good son,” said his mother, as she straightened.  “I’m afraid I’m growing too old for such adventure.”

“No such thing, mother,” said Trajan. “I merely have more reach than you.” He handed her the leaves.

“To say the least,” she laughed and put a wrinkled hand to his cheek.

She'd tied her ropy locks back, exposing the blue half-moon tattooed on her forehead, and her white robes stood in contrast to her berry-brown skin. People said Trajan looked much like her. The same full lips and expressive brown eyes, a wide forehead that could cloud over in an instant, and then just as quickly clear up again. But where she was short and round, heavy like the carved effigies of the Goddess while he had his father's tall slender build and a burnished gold tone.

“So, my son, what wind has blown you to me so soon? I did not expect you for a few days yet.” Trajan did not answer immediately. He ran his hand over the tattoos on his bare chest. Trajan hoped to join his mother as Mehen, a holy servant of the Goddess. His own shoulder-length hair was already being tended into rough, rope-like locks and he had spent the better part of the last moon under his mentor’s needle covering most of his body in sacred markings.

“Mother, you know that father's new bride arrived at the start of the rainy season,” Trajan finally said.

“I know this,” she said slowly. “As I understand, she is a follower of the new faith, like him.”

“She is. Her name is Aysa.”

“I hear she is very young—no older than you. How does she fare?”

“She is well,” he answered carefully. “She is very comely.”

“I don't doubt that, your father always did have an eye for beauty,” said his mother, with a fond smile. “You know, in my day they called me 'Thenasis the Beautiful.'”

“And she is very learned. She can read and write in two languages. In many ways she is just like you.”

 

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Contributors
Abdulaziz Abdulaziz
Ahmed Farah
Amechi Obumse
Auwal S. Muktar
Binta Shuaibu
Chinelo Onwualu
Chioma Iwunze
Chioma Iwunze (2)
Dami Ajayi
Dami Ajayi (2)
D M D Goodhead
Emmanuel Iduma
Emmanuella Nduonofit
Gbubemi Amas
Gimba Kakanda
Henry Onyeama
Ifesinachi Okoli
Ify Omalicha
Isa Muhammad Inuwa
Jerome Dooga
Jingii
Kola Tubosun
Kola Tubosun (2)
Numero Unoma
Nwilo Bura-Bari V
Richard Ugbede Ali
Sifa Gowon
Tade Ipadeola
Temitayo Olofinlua
Temitayo Olofinlua (2)
Uche Peter Umez
Unwana Umana

Chinelo Onwualu has a Master's degree in Journalism from Syracuse University and a Bachelor's Degree in English from Calvin College. She worked as a Website editor for newspapers in Virginia and New York. She has lived in Eastern Europe, North and Central Africa and is now living in Abuja, Nigeria. She has written for the Abuja Inquirer and is currently working on a novel.

 

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